Comments on: GED Essay: Where to Begin? http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/ Life, Family, Work, and the GED Thu, 08 Dec 2011 22:24:48 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: KS http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-1229 KS Wed, 16 Feb 2011 03:16:20 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-1229 **Note to admin: I don't know where to post this, so if this is posted in the wrong spot, please relocate it and let me know via my email where I'm supposed to post my sample essays. I'd like to share an essay that I wrote and get some feedback on it. -------------------------------------- One important goal I would like to achieve in the next few years is to get a Bachelor of Science degree to work in the field of nursing. First, I plan to schedule an appointment at a community college and meet with a guidance counselor to discuss my needs and goals. I will explain to the counselor that it is my desire to be a caregiver, and that I'm looking to be educated in that field. The counselor will then let me know what courses I will need to study in order to attain my schooling. The guidance counselor will most likely have me take an exam to see where I'm at academically. The test scores will tell me what core courses I need in order to begin the actual nursing school. If none are needed, then I can proceed to nursing school. If I do need remedial work in some of the core courses, then I will take those courses and complete them. Second, I plan to enroll in an online course. I will set aside 4 hours each day to study. It will be a priority for me to not waver from my studies, but to put full effort in for those 4 hours daily, and truly apply myself and try to comprehend what I'm learning. Finally, I will complete all of the online coursework, and any coursework that requires me to be there physically in the lab. I will pay attention while I'm there that I truly try to understand what it is I'm being taught, and to do well so that I can earn my degree. Although it may take some time and effort on my part, it will give me a great sense of accomplishment to attain my degree. **Note to admin: I don’t know where to post this, so if this is posted in the wrong spot, please relocate it and let me know via my email where I’m supposed to post my sample essays. I’d like to share an essay that I wrote and get some feedback on it.

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One important goal I would like to achieve in the next few years is to get a Bachelor of Science degree to work in the field of nursing.

First, I plan to schedule an appointment at a community college and meet with a guidance counselor to discuss my needs and goals. I will explain to the counselor that it is my desire to be a caregiver, and that I’m looking to be educated in that field. The counselor will then let me know what courses I will need to study in order to attain my schooling.

The guidance counselor will most likely have me take an exam to see where I’m at academically. The test scores will tell me what core courses I need in order to begin the actual nursing school. If none are needed, then I can proceed to nursing school. If I do need remedial work in some of the core courses, then I will take those courses and complete them.

Second, I plan to enroll in an online course. I will set aside 4 hours each day to study. It will be a priority for me to not waver from my studies, but to put full effort in for those 4 hours daily, and truly apply myself and try to comprehend what I’m learning.

Finally, I will complete all of the online coursework, and any coursework that requires me to be there physically in the lab. I will pay attention while I’m there that I truly try to understand what it is I’m being taught, and to do well so that I can earn my degree.

Although it may take some time and effort on my part, it will give me a great sense of accomplishment to attain my degree.

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By: shantel http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-1045 shantel Tue, 09 Nov 2010 17:58:42 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-1045 i need help i need help

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By: Liz http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-459 Liz Wed, 04 Nov 2009 21:25:25 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-459 Well, that's a pretty big question... there's more information about characters on Maria's blog... Here's the link to some info on characters: http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/maria/category/characters/ But the idea is, you want to understand them as people. One good thing is to write down each character's name, and then try to think of adjectives to describe them. Say you wanted to tell your friend about this person. What would you say? Are they smart? Are they ugly? Are they fun? Write down as many adjectives as you can think of to describe the character. You can also look at what the character does. What does the character do during the book? Write down the different actions the character takes, and how they react to other people. Then, and this is the really important step---why? Why does the character take this action? What makes them do it or react in a certain way? If you get that down, then you're really getting somewhere! Well, that’s a pretty big question… there’s more information about characters on Maria’s blog… Here’s the link to some info on characters: http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/maria/category/characters/

But the idea is, you want to understand them as people. One good thing is to write down each character’s name, and then try to think of adjectives to describe them. Say you wanted to tell your friend about this person. What would you say? Are they smart? Are they ugly? Are they fun? Write down as many adjectives as you can think of to describe the character.

You can also look at what the character does. What does the character do during the book? Write down the different actions the character takes, and how they react to other people. Then, and this is the really important step—why? Why does the character take this action? What makes them do it or react in a certain way? If you get that down, then you’re really getting somewhere!

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By: Teodomiro Vizcarra http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-444 Teodomiro Vizcarra Thu, 22 Oct 2009 21:56:13 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-444 when finish reading a book,and I want to say about characters,how to start about this. when finish reading a book,and I want to say about characters,how to start about this.

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By: christina http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-374 christina Sun, 16 Aug 2009 21:36:29 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-374 For the last two weeks I've started writing in my notebook. Even though I have got better in writing but I always start a new sentences of I I what to know instead of the word I what other words can I use For the last two weeks I’ve started writing in my notebook. Even though I have got better in writing but I always start a new sentences of I I what to know instead of the word I what other words can I use

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By: christina http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-373 christina Sun, 16 Aug 2009 21:28:45 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-373 I want to know how long Introduction on the GED essay has to be? And I want to know how can I word can I start my I want to know how long Introduction on the GED essay has to be? And I want to know how can I word can I start my

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By: Elizabeth http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-74 Elizabeth Tue, 09 Dec 2008 21:09:19 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-74 Hi, Tanya! I know the essay can be a little intimidating. Here are some things to help... 1)Try to think of some things in advance, that you might use on your essay. You don't know what the question will be, but you can think of some things that might help, like: --Who are some people you admire, and why? --What's important to you in life? What are your goals? --What are some important events that happened to you, that really made you think or taught you something? --What's an important world event that has a special meaning or memory for you? Thinking about these kinds of questions gets your juices going... you might find that you can use them in your essay, or else it's just good practice! Also, here are some techniques you can use to brainstorm while you're in the test. Practice these before the test on some of the questions above, or other practice GED prompts... 1) Freewriting... write down the question and just write for 3-4 minutes, whatever comes into your head. Don't even worry if it's a good idea! 2) Listing... write a list of as many things related to the idea as you can think of. 3) Word Web... write the main idea in the center. Then, draw 3-4 lines from the center, connecting to 3-4 related ideas. Write 3 details or new ideas about each related idea. 4) Questioning... write 3-4 questions about the topic, and then try to answer them. 5) Try answering these questions about the topic (and add more if you can think of them!): --What's my feeling or opinion about this topic? --Who's a person I know who taught me something about this topic? --What's a memory I have about this topic? --How is this topic related to my life? That will give you some ideas to start organizing into an essay. Some techniques work better for some people, so try these out to see what works best for you. Practicing beforehand really helps, so you'll have your essay-writing muscles all flexed and ready to go! Also, it's really important to try to relax. That means, eat a good breakfast. Get plenty of sleep the night before. Bring some good snacks and water along. Wear comfortable clothes. And don't worry! Just concentrate on your essay. Good luck! Liz P.S. I'll make this a separate post, too. Hi, Tanya! I know the essay can be a little intimidating. Here are some things to help…

1)Try to think of some things in advance, that you might use on your essay. You don’t know what the question will be, but you can think of some things that might help, like:
–Who are some people you admire, and why?
–What’s important to you in life? What are your goals?
–What are some important events that happened to you, that really made you think or taught you something?
–What’s an important world event that has a special meaning or memory for you?

Thinking about these kinds of questions gets your juices going… you might find that you can use them in your essay, or else it’s just good practice!

Also, here are some techniques you can use to brainstorm while you’re in the test. Practice these before the test on some of the questions above, or other practice GED prompts…

1) Freewriting… write down the question and just write for 3-4 minutes, whatever comes into your head. Don’t even worry if it’s a good idea!

2) Listing… write a list of as many things related to the idea as you can think of.

3) Word Web… write the main idea in the center. Then, draw 3-4 lines from the center, connecting to 3-4 related ideas. Write 3 details or new ideas about each related idea.

4) Questioning… write 3-4 questions about the topic, and then try to answer them.

5) Try answering these questions about the topic (and add more if you can think of them!):
–What’s my feeling or opinion about this topic?
–Who’s a person I know who taught me something about this topic?
–What’s a memory I have about this topic?
–How is this topic related to my life?

That will give you some ideas to start organizing into an essay. Some techniques work better for some people, so try these out to see what works best for you. Practicing beforehand really helps, so you’ll have your essay-writing muscles all flexed and ready to go!

Also, it’s really important to try to relax. That means, eat a good breakfast. Get plenty of sleep the night before. Bring some good snacks and water along. Wear comfortable clothes. And don’t worry! Just concentrate on your essay.

Good luck!
Liz

P.S. I’ll make this a separate post, too.

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By: Tanya http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/comment-page-1/#comment-73 Tanya Tue, 09 Dec 2008 19:48:05 +0000 http://www.passged.com/student_blogs/elizabeth/2008/11/17/ged-essay-where-to-begin/#comment-73 Im takeing my test next week,and I have a question about,how I start out an essay.Im also a little nervouse about,when they give you a topic,you have to write about it,my brain kinda freezes up.what if I can't think of anything?How do I go about this? Please help! Im takeing my test next week,and I have a question about,how I start out an essay.Im also a little nervouse about,when they give you a topic,you have to write about it,my brain kinda freezes up.what if I can’t think of anything?How do I go about this? Please help!

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