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	<description>Life, Family, Work, and the GED</description>
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		<title>By: Eh Sue Kaung</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eh Sue Kaung</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jan 2010 11:45:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am really happy to get some information from sample GED Essay. On the other hand I hope my writing will improve because my grammar is improving but my writing is very bad. I know writing is very important my GED test.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am really happy to get some information from sample GED Essay. On the other hand I hope my writing will improve because my grammar is improving but my writing is very bad. I know writing is very important my GED test.<br />
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		<title>By: ebonie cole</title>
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		<dc:creator>ebonie cole</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Dec 2009 00:13:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i thought that this sample of an essay was very helpful for me. i am in chattanooga, tn and i attend chattanooga state and i am on my way to taking my ged test and i needed these helpful tips on how to write a great essay.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i thought that this sample of an essay was very helpful for me. i am in chattanooga, tn and i attend chattanooga state and i am on my way to taking my ged test and i needed these helpful tips on how to write a great essay.</p>
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		<title>By: Liz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2009 21:40:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A.D.D. can be tough! First, have you checked whether you qualify for extra time or breaks because of your A.D.D.? It&#039;s at least worth looking into. There&#039;s information on the ACE GED website: &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.acenet.edu/Content/NavigationMenu/ged/test/Take/Accommodations_Disab.htm&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;http://www.acenet.edu/Content/NavigationMenu/ged/test/Take/Accommodations_Disab.htm&lt;/a&gt;

Now, you may or may not be able to get accommodations, depending on your medical history. There are still things you can do to maintain focus. One is breaking apart the essay into smaller tasks. Write a list on your notepaper of the things you&#039;re going to do:
1) Read the prompt and restate it in my own words:
2) Make an outline of a main idea, two supporting ideas, and a conclusion:
3) Write an intro paragraph:
4) Write the first body paragraph:
5) Write the second body paragraph:
6) Write the conclusion:

That gives you six small things to do, instead of one big thing that you can be lost in. It&#039;ll also help your writing stay organized and focused. A couple more tips: (1) Give yourself a break. If you find yourself drifting, take a deep breath, look around, say &quot;I can do this,&quot; and re-focus. It can help to have a ritual, like doodling a cat or saying a mantra (I will pass!) to yourself, to give a short break and then be back on track. (2) Eat before the test, layer your clothes so you won&#039;t get too hot or cold, and choose a seat that won&#039;t be distracting. Being hungry or by a window or cold or hot can ruin your concentration, so pay attention to your needs!

Hope this helps!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A.D.D. can be tough! First, have you checked whether you qualify for extra time or breaks because of your A.D.D.? It&#8217;s at least worth looking into. There&#8217;s information on the ACE GED website: <a href="http://www.acenet.edu/Content/NavigationMenu/ged/test/Take/Accommodations_Disab.htm" rel="nofollow">http://www.acenet.edu/Content/NavigationMenu/ged/test/Take/Accommodations_Disab.htm</a></p>
<p>Now, you may or may not be able to get accommodations, depending on your medical history. There are still things you can do to maintain focus. One is breaking apart the essay into smaller tasks. Write a list on your notepaper of the things you&#8217;re going to do:<br />
1) Read the prompt and restate it in my own words:<br />
2) Make an outline of a main idea, two supporting ideas, and a conclusion:<br />
3) Write an intro paragraph:<br />
4) Write the first body paragraph:<br />
5) Write the second body paragraph:<br />
6) Write the conclusion:</p>
<p>That gives you six small things to do, instead of one big thing that you can be lost in. It&#8217;ll also help your writing stay organized and focused. A couple more tips: (1) Give yourself a break. If you find yourself drifting, take a deep breath, look around, say &#8220;I can do this,&#8221; and re-focus. It can help to have a ritual, like doodling a cat or saying a mantra (I will pass!) to yourself, to give a short break and then be back on track. (2) Eat before the test, layer your clothes so you won&#8217;t get too hot or cold, and choose a seat that won&#8217;t be distracting. Being hungry or by a window or cold or hot can ruin your concentration, so pay attention to your needs!</p>
<p>Hope this helps!</p>
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		<title>By: Brock</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brock</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Nov 2009 19:23:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have A.D.D and staying on task is really hard for me I have been to take practice tests for the GED and would have passed if the essay was not a part of it. I also have a few problems when it comes to writing.  Do you know of any good methods to stay on task.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have A.D.D and staying on task is really hard for me I have been to take practice tests for the GED and would have passed if the essay was not a part of it. I also have a few problems when it comes to writing.  Do you know of any good methods to stay on task.</p>
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		<title>By: Liz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 14:31:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Simon,

That&#039;s a good question. The GED essay is a 45-minute exam, and you have to write an essay responding to one prompt. The prompt will ask you about a topic that relates to your life or that you&#039;re likely to be familiar with. It might ask you your opinions or experience. You&#039;ll need to write a response that completely responds to the prompt, that&#039;s well organized, that&#039;s easy to read (without too many mistakes), that has details, and that hopefully says something interesting!

An example of a GED writing prompt might be:

&lt;blockquote&gt;Many people are interested in researching their family history and cultural heritage. Explain why this might be important and what people learn about themselves from their family background. Use your personal observations, experience, and knowledge to support your essay.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

You won&#039;t know the subject of the essay before your test, so you need to be prepared to think about the topic and compare it to your life. For example, with this topic, I&#039;d think about my own background. What have I learned from my grandparents? What do I know about my own family background, and have I ever tried to find out more? Do I know anyone who&#039;s researched their family background? Why did they want to do that? Linking the topic to your life really helps you write a good essay.

Liz</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Simon,</p>
<p>That&#8217;s a good question. The GED essay is a 45-minute exam, and you have to write an essay responding to one prompt. The prompt will ask you about a topic that relates to your life or that you&#8217;re likely to be familiar with. It might ask you your opinions or experience. You&#8217;ll need to write a response that completely responds to the prompt, that&#8217;s well organized, that&#8217;s easy to read (without too many mistakes), that has details, and that hopefully says something interesting!</p>
<p>An example of a GED writing prompt might be:</p>
<blockquote><p>Many people are interested in researching their family history and cultural heritage. Explain why this might be important and what people learn about themselves from their family background. Use your personal observations, experience, and knowledge to support your essay.</p></blockquote>
<p>You won&#8217;t know the subject of the essay before your test, so you need to be prepared to think about the topic and compare it to your life. For example, with this topic, I&#8217;d think about my own background. What have I learned from my grandparents? What do I know about my own family background, and have I ever tried to find out more? Do I know anyone who&#8217;s researched their family background? Why did they want to do that? Linking the topic to your life really helps you write a good essay.</p>
<p>Liz</p>
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		<title>By: simon</title>
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		<dc:creator>simon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 01:58:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>does anyone know what kind of eesay they give on GED?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>does anyone know what kind of eesay they give on GED?</p>
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		<title>By: Liz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Apr 2009 15:12:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Heather, I totally disagree. Repeating your topic sentence makes your writing formulaic, not authentic. It&#039;s a sign of someone who&#039;s been taught by &quot;rote&quot; to write a specific kind of flat, formula essay, not someone who knows how to write. The conclusion should restate (in a new way!) your main idea, but it should also add to your main idea. It needs to come to some conclusion about what you&#039;ve written, an overarching idea or extension of your ideas. It certainly shouldn&#039;t repeat what you&#039;ve said before. That&#039;s not good writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heather, I totally disagree. Repeating your topic sentence makes your writing formulaic, not authentic. It&#8217;s a sign of someone who&#8217;s been taught by &#8220;rote&#8221; to write a specific kind of flat, formula essay, not someone who knows how to write. The conclusion should restate (in a new way!) your main idea, but it should also add to your main idea. It needs to come to some conclusion about what you&#8217;ve written, an overarching idea or extension of your ideas. It certainly shouldn&#8217;t repeat what you&#8217;ve said before. That&#8217;s not good writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Heather</title>
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		<dc:creator>Heather</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Apr 2009 14:39:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The topic sentence should  be repeated at the beginning of the conclusion paragraph.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The topic sentence should  be repeated at the beginning of the conclusion paragraph.</p>
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		<title>By: Liz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Oct 2008 19:28:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, Leesa, you caught me... but trust me, no one is going to mark you off on your GED essay for saying &quot;good&quot; instead of &quot;well.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, Leesa, you caught me&#8230; but trust me, no one is going to mark you off on your GED essay for saying &#8220;good&#8221; instead of &#8220;well.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Leesa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leesa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Oct 2008 16:49:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You lost me in your greeting.  &quot;I hope the GED studying is going GOOD.&quot;   Eeeeek!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You lost me in your greeting.  &#8220;I hope the GED studying is going GOOD.&#8221;   Eeeeek!</p>
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