Writers Notebook - Letter to Octavio

I am sending you a copy of the letter that I plan to give to Roberto when he is older. I hope that it will help you understand why I do not want you in our lives right now. Your letter said you've changed, but I can't take the chance that it's not true, for Roberto's sake. I hope that you can respect my decision. Please write me back, and let me know that you will not call me anymore or try to see Roberto.

Sincerely,

Maria

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Average user rating from: 1 user(s)


Overall rating		3.6
1. Main Idea		4.0
2. Organization		3.0
3. Writing Style and Language		4.0
4. Interesting Content		2.0
5. Spelling, Punctuaion, and Grammar		5.0

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Saturday, 12 January 2008

Written by Curtis


Overall rating		3.6
1. Main Idea		4.0
2. Organization		3.0
3. Writing Style and Language		4.0
4. Interesting Content		2.0
5. Spelling, Punctuaion, and Grammar		5.0

Hey, girl, good job again. I give it lower scores cuz there ain't so much you got to say here. I mean, it's just a short letter, right? You got to say it, but ain't too interesting for me to read. An' cuz it's short, it don't have much fancy organization, either. I guess that's just cuz what it is.

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