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Dec 10
2007
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Job Application Letter (DRAFT)
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Elizabeth Strong
1234 Main Street
Small Town, IN 12345
April 5, 2007
Ms. Tabitha Jones
Happy Chimney Sweeps
P.O. Box 54321
Small Town, IN 12345
Dear Ms. Jones:
I was excited to read about the job of chimney sweep in the newspaper. My name is Elizabeth Strong, and I am looking for an opportunity to use my growing skills. Cleaning chimneys
sounds like the perfect job for me.
I have always enjoyed cleaning and working outside. Raising two sons and taking care of my house, I learned a lot about properly maintaining a home. I also have experience cleaning at my job, and I can do physical work and move large items. My résumé gives more details of my work experience and shows my reliability and consistency.
I have been working on improving my skills and studying to earn my GED. I am looking for new opportunities to advance higher, and what is higher than the rooftops?
Thank you for considering me for this great job. Please contact me at the phone number on my résumé to set up an interview. I'm looking forward to meeting you and talking more about becoming a chimney sweep.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth Strong
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