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Overall rating		4.8
1. Main Idea		5.0
2. Organization		5.0
3. Writing Style and Language		4.0
4. Interesting Content		5.0
5. Spelling, Punctuaion, and Grammar		5.0

 

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Friday, 01 February 2008

Written by Maria

Overall rating		4.6
1. Main Idea		5.0
2. Organization		5.0
3. Writing Style and Language		3.0
4. Interesting Content		5.0
5. Spelling, Punctuaion, and Grammar		5.0

Hi, Curtis. I think this is really good, except the writing seems a little awkward and maybe choppy, too. Maybe you could have some better transitions or combine sentences. Like, it says "In the desert in Peru, there are lines on the ground called Nazca lines. The Nazca people made them years ago." Maybe it could say, "Years ago in the Peruvian desert, the Nazca people made mysterious lines on the ground, called Nazca lines." Do you kinda see what I mean?

Saturday, 12 January 2008

Written by Dwayne

Overall rating		5.0
1. Main Idea		5.0
2. Organization		5.0
3. Writing Style and Language		5.0
4. Interesting Content		5.0
5. Spelling, Punctuaion, and Grammar		5.0

Dude! Good writing, but Dude! How can you say the Nazca lines ain't proof of aliens! That's crazy...

Oh... I guess I ain't s'posed to judge by whether I agree or not. So I give you 5s all over. Seriously, Dude, good job.

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